Proofread: QA changes

astro/src/content/docs/extend/examples/progressive-registration.mdx

@@ -67,7 +67,7 @@ apiKey="33052c8a-c283-4e96-9d2a-eb1215c69f8f-not-for-prod"
 
 The `fusionAuthURLBackend` variable specifies the internal URL for communication between the web application and the `fusionauth` service within Docker. The `apiKey` variable will be used by the client to communicate with the FusionAuth API.
 
-In the `complete-application/src/index.ts` file, define these variables at the top along with the other definitions for `clientId` and `clientSecret` etc.
+At the top of the `complete-application/src/index.ts` file, define the following variables with `clientId`, `clientSecret`, and other related definitions.
 
 ```ts
 if (!process.env.fusionAuthURLBackend) {
@@ -99,13 +99,13 @@ const getKey: GetPublicKeyOrSecret = async (header, callback) => {
 };
 ```
 
-Also update the `client` declaration to use the `apiKey`.
+Update the `client` declaration to use the `apiKey`.
 
 ```ts
 const client = new FusionAuthClient(apiKey as string, fusionAuthURLBackend);
 ```
 
-Once these changes are made, you can start the application with Docker by running the following command in a terminal within the `complete-application` directory.
+Once these changes are made, you can start the application with Docker by running the following command in a terminal from the `complete-application` directory.
 
 ```sh
 docker run --platform=linux/amd64 --rm --network fusionauth_network -p 8080:8080 -v ".:/app" -w "/app" -e "PORT=8080" node:23-bullseye-slim sh -c "npm i && npm run dev"
@@ -242,7 +242,7 @@ app.get('/login', (req, res, next) => {
 });
 ```
 
-Save the changes and navigate to the registration page to view the two-step registration pages, though you will still need to complete a few more steps outlined below before the registration flow actually works. The first step collects the user's first name, last name, and email.
+Save the changes and navigate to the registration page to view the two-step registration pages (note that the registration flow won't function before you have completed the steps outlined below). The first step collects the user's first name, last name, and email.
 
 <img src="/img/docs/extend/progressive-registration/registration-form-first-step.png" alt="Registration form first step"/>