Merge pull request #332 from edx/ahodges/DOC-332

Fixes DOC-332 for Insights guide
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diff --git a/docs/en_us/dashboard/source/Overview.rst b/docs/en_us/dashboard/source/Overview.rst
@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@ Overview
 #############
 
 EdX Insights makes information about courses available to course team members
-who have the Course Staff or Instructor role. EdX Insights provides these
+who have the Staff or Admin role. EdX Insights provides these
 course team members with data about student activity, background, and
 performance throughout the course. Using edX Insights can help you monitor how
 students are doing, and validate the choices you made in designing your

diff --git a/docs/en_us/dashboard/source/Reference.rst b/docs/en_us/dashboard/source/Reference.rst
@@ -25,9 +25,9 @@ All Computations
 .. Jennifer asks for an x-ref to more information. Better place might be course_enrollment.rst in Running.
 
 * All users who are enrolled in a course are included in the computations for
-  that course. This means that in addition to the students, all staff members,
-  beta testers, and discussion admins and moderators who have privileged roles
-  in the course are included.
+  that course. This means that in addition to the students, all of the course
+  team members, beta testers, and discussion moderation team members are
+  included.
 
 .. spacer
 
@@ -59,7 +59,7 @@ For information about viewing enrollment activity data in edX Insights, see
 * The daily computations use the enrollment status of each user as of 23:59 UTC
   on the previous day.
 
-* Course staff can enroll students from the **Membership** page in the
+* Course team members can enroll students from the **Membership** page in the
   Instructor Dashboard by supplying a list of email addresses or usernames.
   Actual resulting enrollments can occur on different dates, as follows.
 
@@ -69,7 +69,7 @@ For information about viewing enrollment activity data in edX Insights, see
 
  * When **Auto Enroll** is selected, each student who already has a user
    account is enrolled in the course and included in the count as of the date
-   and time the initiating staff member clicks **Enroll**.
+   and time the initiating team member clicks **Enroll**.
 
    Students who are automatically enrolled in a course but have not yet
    registered a user account are included as of the date and time that they do

diff --git a/docs/en_us/dashboard/source/engagement/Engagement_Content.rst b/docs/en_us/dashboard/source/engagement/Engagement_Content.rst
@@ -32,7 +32,7 @@ a one week period. To see the total count for each activity type for a given
 week, move your cursor over the chart to display a tip.
 
 Activity is included beginning with the week in which the first page visit took
-place. The first page visit is typically by a member of the course staff
+place. The first page visit is typically by a member of the course team
 shortly after course creation.  This data is also available for review in
 tabular format and can be downloaded. See the **Content Engagement Breakdown**
 report.

diff --git a/docs/en_us/dashboard/source/engagement/Engagement_Video.rst b/docs/en_us/dashboard/source/engagement/Engagement_Video.rst
@@ -37,7 +37,7 @@ Selecting the Section, Subsection, and Video
 To access data about a video component, follow these steps.
 
 #. Open edX Insights at insights.edx.org. A list of the courses for which you
-   have the admin or staff role appears.
+   have the Admin or Staff role appears.
 
 #. Select the course.
 

diff --git a/docs/en_us/dashboard/source/enrollment/Enrollment_Activity.rst b/docs/en_us/dashboard/source/enrollment/Enrollment_Activity.rst
@@ -43,10 +43,10 @@ enrollment (typically of the course creator). This data is also available for
 review in tabular format and can be downloaded.
 
 A couple of examples of this chart follow for different courses. In the first
-example, for a MOOC, you see enrollment climb fairly steadily over a period of 
+example, for a MOOC, you see enrollment climb fairly steadily over a period of
 several months. The markers begin with two "student" enrollments (almost
-certainly the course creator and another staff member) on the day the course
-was created in Studio.
+certainly the course creator and another course team member) on the day the
+course was created in Studio.
 
 .. image:: ../images/enrollment_chart.png
  :alt: A chart with the periods when the rate of enrollment was greater