Update UX Copy on Home Page

[mareekuh]

[9:56 AM] Scott Gellock
[..] we should change the text that is on the Composer apps "home" age
we say that Composer is an integrated developement environemtn (IDE) for building bots.
but it's not an IDE. We don't debug, we don't write C# or JS or Python or Java code.
Integrated develop,ent Evnironments are heavy weight developer tools. Eclipse, Visual Studio, JetBrains, XCode are the only 4 IDE tools left in the market place.

@zxyanliu - Do you have a suggestion for what to replace this with?

[zxyanliu]

@mareekuh I have two suggestions: a short one and a long one.

1. "Bot Framework Composer is an open-source visual authoring canvas for developers and multi-disciplinary teams to design and build conversational experiences."

2. Bot Framework Composer is an open-source visual authoring canvas for developers and multi-disciplinary teams to build bots. Composer integrates language understanding services such as LUIS and QnA Maker and allows sophisticated composition of bot replies using Language Generation.

[zxyanliu]

Hi @mareekuh and @cwhitten, can you guys help pick one of the descriptions / or propose new ones so that I can update this in the UI? thanks.

[mareekuh]

Can we use what we have on the website?

Bot Framework Composer is an open-source, visual authoring canvas for developers and multi-disciplinary teams to design and build conversational experiences with Language Understanding, QnA Maker, and sophisticated composition of bot replies (Language Generation).

[zxyanliu]

@mareekuh I think the one used on the website is too long and without any breaks.
I asked @JonathanFingold for help. We came up with the following one:

Bot Framework Composer is an open-source visual authoring canvas for developers and multi-disciplinary teams to build bots. Composer integrates language understanding services such as LUIS and QnA Maker, and allows sophisticated composition of bot replies using language generation.

What do you think?

[mareekuh]

Looks good to me! I’ll get the one on the web updated. From: Yan Liu <notifications@github.com> Date: Tuesday, July 14, 2020 at 1:14 PM To: microsoft/BotFramework-Composer <BotFramework-Composer@noreply.github.com> Cc: Marieke Iwema <mariekei@microsoft.com>, Mention <mention@noreply.github.com> Subject: Re: [microsoft/BotFramework-Composer] Update UX Copy on Home Page (#3625) @mareekuh<https://nam06.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Fgithub.com%2Fmareekuh&data=02%7C01%7Cmariekei%40microsoft.com%7C5f43d768702c4fad8aeb08d8283293fd%7C72f988bf86f141af91ab2d7cd011db47%7C1%7C0%7C637303544981668943&sdata=c0IvzRB5yY7M7JRMd%2F%2BiQ2jeRdbtbfeKlRBdOpf6KpM%3D&reserved=0> I think the one used on the website is too long and without any breaks. I asked @JonathanFingold<https://nam06.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Fgithub.com%2FJonathanFingold&data=02%7C01%7Cmariekei%40microsoft.com%7C5f43d768702c4fad8aeb08d8283293fd%7C72f988bf86f141af91ab2d7cd011db47%7C1%7C0%7C637303544981668943&sdata=kfcwamJoqgvFZpyXT58eUaI%2BLVl%2FI4G8iCP8fuHIPI0%3D&reserved=0> for help. We came up with the following one: Bot Framework Composer is an open-source visual authoring canvas for developers and multi-disciplinary teams to build bots. Composer integrates language understanding services, such as LUIS and QnA Maker, and allows sophisticated composition of bot replies using language generation. — You are receiving this because you were mentioned. Reply to this email directly, view it on GitHub<https://nam06.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Fgithub.com%2Fmicrosoft%2FBotFramework-Composer%2Fissues%2F3625%23issuecomment-658390211&data=02%7C01%7Cmariekei%40microsoft.com%7C5f43d768702c4fad8aeb08d8283293fd%7C72f988bf86f141af91ab2d7cd011db47%7C1%7C0%7C637303544981678938&sdata=vbi7G8Qke0DufMdLaqknwnwpRjDgy67dJR0qi94LCj4%3D&reserved=0>, or unsubscribe<https://nam06.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Fgithub.com%2Fnotifications%2Funsubscribe-auth%2FALSBVCQ7QSYPGTVRQHJ7NDLR3S4EBANCNFSM4OYV45QA&data=02%7C01%7Cmariekei%40microsoft.com%7C5f43d768702c4fad8aeb08d8283293fd%7C72f988bf86f141af91ab2d7cd011db47%7C1%7C0%7C637303544981678938&sdata=nTYQ0L8MBqx5FUKcnihyMjUDRHa4pXaxBEFbPR9Lk%2B8%3D&reserved=0>.

[zxyanliu]

@mareekuh
I found another text in Composer which might need to update as well:

[zxyanliu]

@mareekuh FYI.
This is my proposal in PR#3651.

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[mareekuh]

Looks great. If you want to shorten, we can drop the 2nd sentence but this, as is, works for me.