[zh-cn] update writing style guide

[jasonren0403]

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part of #11063

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Preview URLs

• /zh-CN/docs/MDN/Writing_guidelines/Writing_style_guide

Flaws (7)

URL: /zh-CN/docs/MDN/Writing_guidelines/Writing_style_guide
Title: 文档写作规范
Flaw count: 7

• macros:
  • /zh-CN/docs/Web/CSS/revert-layer does not exist but fell back to /en-US/docs/Web/CSS/revert-layer
  • /zh-CN/docs/Web/CSS/revert-layer does not exist but fell back to /en-US/docs/Web/CSS/revert-layer
  • /zh-CN/docs/Web/CSS/text-emphasis-color does not exist but fell back to /en-US/docs/Web/CSS/text-emphasis-color
• broken_links:
  • Can use the English (en-US) link as a fallback
  • Can use the English (en-US) link as a fallback
  • Can use the English (en-US) link as a fallback
  • Can't resolve /zh-CN/docs/Web/JavaScript/Guide/Details_of_the_Object_Model

External URLs (12)

URL: /zh-CN/docs/MDN/Writing_guidelines/Writing_style_guide
Title: 文档写作规范

• https://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/2.5/ (1 time) (Note! This may be a new URL 👀)
• https://creativecommons.org/share-your-work/public-domain/cc0/ (1 time) (Note! This may be a new URL 👀)
• https://docs.microsoft.com/zh-cn/style-guide (1 time) (Note! This may be a new URL 👀)
• https://faculty.cascadia.edu/cma/HIST148/cmscrib.pdf (1 time) (Note! This may be a new URL 👀)
• https://imageoptim.com (1 time) (Note! This may be a new URL 👀)
• https://jakearchibald.github.io/svgomg/ (1 time) (Note! This may be a new URL 👀)
• https://tinypng.com (1 time) (Note! This may be a new URL 👀)
• https://v8.dev/features/top-level-await (2 times) (Note! This may be a new URL 👀)
• https://www.chicagomanualofstyle.org (1 time) (Note! This may be a new URL 👀)
• https://www.dictionary.com/ (1 time) (Note! This may be a new URL 👀)
• https://www.dictionary.com/browse/behavior (1 time) (Note! This may be a new URL 👀)
• https://www.dictionary.com/browse/behaviour (1 time) (Note! This may be a new URL 👀)

(comment last updated: 2023-05-22 12:00:05)

[yin1999]

先修改一下这几点

[yin1999]

考虑改成这样：

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[yin1999]

Thanks @jasonren0403. Feel free to merge this when you think it's ready ;)