Update heading position on why-fleet.md #14884
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I moved the "What's it for?" heading. I realized after checking the new content on the site that placing it between the new paragraphs disrupted the message. I also addressed some grammar and formatting issues. Removed some redundant words, and rephrased a couple of sentences to give a more personable tone.
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docs/Get started/why-fleet.md
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| @@ -31,42 +31,38 @@ Here are the platforms Fleet currently supports: | |||
| - Linux-based IoT devices | |||
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| ## Lighter than air | |||
| Fleet is lightweight and modular. You can use it for security without using it for MDM, and vice versa. You can turn off features you are not using. | |||
| Fleet is lightweight and modular. You can use it for security without MDM and vice versa. You can turn off features you are not using. | |||
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disagree with this line change. MDM is a capability, and this change makes it less clear
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Ok, that makes sense.
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I moved the "What's it for?" heading. After seeing it on the site (rather than Markdown) I feel that placing it between the new paragraphs disrupts the message.
I also addressed some grammar and formatting issues. Removed some redundant words and rephrased a couple of sentences to give a more personable tone.
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