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docs: add comments for funcs #22276

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add comments for funcs

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  • New Features

    • Enhanced string key handling with new encoding and decoding methods.
    • Added key information retrieval method in the auto CLI keyring.
    • Improved password hashing functionality with customizable salt options.
    • New methods for robust retrieval of protobuf extensions and message types.
    • Enhanced dependency injection capabilities with new methods for managing providers and resolvers.
  • Bug Fixes

    • Improved error handling with structured messages for specific conditions.

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This pull request introduces multiple enhancements across various packages. Key changes include the addition of new methods for encoding and decoding string keys in the codec package, improvements to the autoCLIKeyring interface in the crypto/keyring package, and enhancements to password hashing functionality in the bcrypt package. Additionally, the depinject package sees significant updates with new methods for managing dependencies, error handling improvements, and better struct argument handling.

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File Path Change Summary
collections/codec/string.go Added methods EncodeNonTerminal and DecodeNonTerminal to stringKey[T] for string key handling.
crypto/keyring/autocli.go Introduced KeyInfo method in autoCLIKeyringAdapter and added comments for clarity.
crypto/keys/bcrypt/bcrypt.go Added new functions for password hashing, including GenerateFromPassword with a salt parameter.
depinject/appconfig/dynamic_resolver.go Added methods for finding protobuf extensions and message types.
depinject/container.go Introduced new methods for container initialization, provider invocation, and dependency management.
depinject/errors.go Added new error creation functions and methods for structured error messages.
depinject/provider_desc.go Introduced functions for extracting and validating provider descriptors.
depinject/struct_args.go Added functions for handling struct-based inputs and outputs in dependency injection.

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C:collections, C:CLI, C:x/auth, C:x/tx, C:x/consensus

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🧹 Outside diff range and nitpick comments (22)
depinject/errors.go (2)

Line range hint 25-32: LGTM with a minor suggestion: Consider using strings.Builder for error message

The Error method for ErrMultipleImplicitInterfaceBindings is well-implemented. It provides a detailed error message and correctly uses the fullyQualifiedTypeName helper function.

Consider using strings.Builder for more efficient string concatenation, especially if the number of matches could be large:

var b strings.Builder
for _, m := range err.Matches {
    fmt.Fprintf(&b, "\n  %s", fullyQualifiedTypeName(m))
}
return fmt.Sprintf("Multiple implementations found for interface %v: %s", err.Interface, b.String())

Line range hint 56-65: LGTM with a minor suggestion: Consider using a single format string

The Error method for ErrNoTypeForExplicitBindingFound is well-implemented. It provides clear and informative error messages, handling cases with and without module names.

Consider using a single format string with conditional formatting for the module name. This can make the code more concise and easier to maintain:

func (err ErrNoTypeForExplicitBindingFound) Error() string {
    return fmt.Sprintf("No type for explicit binding found. Given the explicit interface binding %s%s, a provider of type %s was not found.",
        err.Interface,
        map[bool]string{true: fmt.Sprintf(" in module %s", err.ModuleName), false: ""}[err.ModuleName != ""],
        err.Implementation)
}
crypto/keyring/autocli.go (1)

Line range hint 109-139: LGTM: New KeyInfo method added with good error handling

The new KeyInfo method provides a flexible way to retrieve key information by handling both key names and addresses as input. The error handling is appropriate, and the logic for differentiating between name and address input is sound.

Consider adding some inline comments to explain the logic flow, especially the differentiation between name and address input. For example:

// KeyInfo returns key name, key address, and key type given a key name or address.
func (a *autoCLIKeyringAdapter) KeyInfo(nameOrAddr string) (string, string, uint, error) {
    // First, try to interpret the input as an address
    addr, err := a.ac.StringToBytes(nameOrAddr)
    if err != nil {
        // If conversion fails, treat the input as a key name
        // ... (existing code)
    }

    // If conversion succeeds, treat the input as an address
    // ... (existing code)
}

This would enhance the readability and maintainability of the code.

collections/codec/string.go (2)

Line range hint 40-51: Append StringDelimiter to buffer in EncodeNonTerminal

The EncodeNonTerminal function is expected to write len(key) + 1 bytes to buffer, but it currently writes only len(key) bytes. The StringDelimiter is not appended to the buffer after the key, which may lead to decoding errors in DecodeNonTerminal.

Apply this diff to append the StringDelimiter to the buffer:

func (stringKey[T]) EncodeNonTerminal(buffer []byte, key T) (int, error) {
    for i := range key {
        c := key[i]
        if c == StringDelimiter {
            return 0, fmt.Errorf("%w: string is not allowed to have the string delimiter (%c) in non-terminal encodings of strings", ErrEncoding, StringDelimiter)
        }
        buffer[i] = c
    }
+   buffer[len(key)] = StringDelimiter
    return len(key) + 1, nil
}

Line range hint 40-51: Check buffer capacity before writing in EncodeNonTerminal

To prevent potential out-of-bounds writes, ensure that the provided buffer has sufficient capacity to hold len(key) + 1 bytes before writing to it. Without this check, writing beyond the buffer's capacity could cause runtime panics.

Apply this diff to check the buffer capacity:

func (stringKey[T]) EncodeNonTerminal(buffer []byte, key T) (int, error) {
+   if len(buffer) < len(key)+1 {
+       return 0, fmt.Errorf("%w: buffer too small to encode key", ErrEncoding)
+   }
    for i := range key {
        c := key[i]
        if c == StringDelimiter {
            return 0, fmt.Errorf("%w: string is not allowed to have the string delimiter (%c) in non-terminal encodings of strings", ErrEncoding, StringDelimiter)
        }
        buffer[i] = c
    }
    buffer[len(key)] = StringDelimiter
    return len(key) + 1, nil
}
depinject/provider_desc.go (3)

50-51: Revise the function comment for clarity

The comment for extractInvokerDescriptor can be improved to better align with Go conventions. It is recommended to combine the two sentences into one concise sentence that starts with the function name and ends with a period.

Apply this diff to revise the comment:

-// extractInvokerDescriptor extracts an invoker descriptor from a given provider function.
-// It marks all inputs as optional.
+// extractInvokerDescriptor extracts an invoker descriptor from a given provider function, marking all inputs as optional.

67-67: Use consistent parameter naming

Consider renaming the parameter ctr in doExtractProviderDescriptor to provider for consistency with the other functions extractProviderDescriptor and extractInvokerDescriptor. This enhances readability and maintains uniformity across similar functions.

Apply this diff to rename the parameter:

-func doExtractProviderDescriptor(ctr interface{}) (providerDescriptor, error) {
+func doExtractProviderDescriptor(provider interface{}) (providerDescriptor, error) {
     val := reflect.ValueOf(provider)
     typ := val.Type()

Line range hint 85-87: Avoid using experimental packages

The use of slices.Contains from the golang.org/x/exp/slices package introduces a dependency on experimental code that may change in future releases. To ensure stability and compatibility, consider implementing the Contains functionality without relying on experimental packages.

Apply this diff to replace slices.Contains with a standard implementation:

-import (
     "fmt"
     "reflect"
     "strings"
     "unicode"

-    "golang.org/x/exp/slices"
 )

 ...

- if slices.Contains(pkgParts, "internal") {
+ if contains(pkgParts, "internal") {
     return providerDescriptor{}, fmt.Errorf("function must not be in an internal package: %s", loc)
 }

+// contains checks if a slice contains a specific string.
+func contains(slice []string, item string) bool {
+    for _, s := range slice {
+        if s == item {
+            return true
+        }
+    }
+    return false
+}
depinject/struct_args.go (2)

38-39: Add periods at the end of sentences in comments

The function comments should be complete sentences ending with a period, as per the Uber Go Style Guide.

Apply this diff to add periods at the end of the comments:

-// expandStructArgsProvider expands the inputs and outputs of a provider descriptor
-// if they are structs that implement the In or Out interfaces.
+// expandStructArgsProvider expands the inputs and outputs of a provider descriptor.
+// If they are structs that implement the In or Out interfaces.

70-71: Add periods at the end of sentences in comments

Ensure that comments are complete sentences ending with a period, following the Uber Go Style Guide.

Apply this diff:

-// expandStructArgsFn returns a new function that handles struct arguments
-// for both inputs and outputs of the provider.
+// expandStructArgsFn returns a new function that handles struct arguments for both inputs and outputs of the provider.
crypto/keys/bcrypt/bcrypt.go (7)

Line range hint 133-155: Simplify the return statement in newFromPassword.

The function newFromPassword always returns err as nil at the end since any error would have caused an earlier return. You can simplify the return statement by returning nil directly.

Apply the following diff to simplify the code:

 func newFromPassword(salt, password []byte, cost uint32) (*hashed, error) {
     // ... existing code ...
     p.hash = hash
-    return p, err
+    return p, nil
 }

Line range hint 157-185: Simplify the return statement in newFromHash.

Similar to newFromPassword, the err variable at the end of newFromHash is always nil. You can simplify the return statement.

Apply the following diff:

 func newFromHash(hashedSecret []byte) (*hashed, error) {
     // ... existing code ...
     return p, nil
 }

Line range hint 186-207: Consider variable scoping for loop indices in bcrypt.

The loop variables i and j can be limited in scope by declaring them within the for-loops. This enhances readability and maintains narrower variable scopes.

Apply the following diff:

 func bcrypt(password []byte, cost uint32, salt []byte) ([]byte, error) {
     // ... existing code ...
-    for i := 0; i < 24; i += 8 {
-        for j := 0; j < 64; j++ {
+    for i := 0; i < 24; i += 8 {
+        for j := 0; j < 64; j++ {
             c.Encrypt(cipherData[i:i+8], cipherData[i:i+8])
         }
     }

Line range hint 208-234: Avoid unnecessary slicing in expensiveBlowfishSetup.

In the line ckey := append(key[:len(key):len(key)], 0), the slicing can be simplified unless there's a specific need for full slice expressions. This makes the code cleaner and easier to understand.

Apply the following diff:

-    ckey := append(key[:len(key):len(key)], 0)
+    ckey := append(key, 0)

Line range hint 258-275: Handle potential out-of-range slice access in decodeVersion.

In decodeVersion, accessing sbytes[2] assumes that sbytes has at least three elements. Add a check to prevent a potential panic when the hashed password is malformed.

Apply the following diff to add a length check:

 func (p *hashed) decodeVersion(sbytes []byte) (int, error) {
     if sbytes[0] != '$' {
         return -1, InvalidHashPrefixError(sbytes[0])
     }
     if sbytes[1] > majorVersion {
         return -1, HashVersionTooNewError(sbytes[1])
     }
     p.major = sbytes[1]
-    n := 3
+    n := 2
     if len(sbytes) > 2 && sbytes[2] != '$' {
         p.minor = sbytes[2]
         n++
     }
     return n, nil
 }

289-293: Implement error interface if appropriate in String method.

Consider whether the String method for hashed should implement the error interface. If hashed represents an error state, implementing the Error() method could be more appropriate.


Line range hint 294-298: Consolidate cost validation in one place.

The checkCost function validates the cost parameter. Ensure that all places where the cost is set or modified call this function to maintain consistent validation.

depinject/container.go (5)

Line range hint 81-83: Improve cyclic dependency error message for better debugging.

In the error handling for cyclic dependencies:

if c.callerMap[loc] {
    return nil, fmt.Errorf("cyclic dependency: %s -> %s", loc.Name(), loc.Name())
}

Both instances of loc.Name() are the same, which may not provide sufficient information to identify the cycle. Consider enhancing the error message to include the sequence of calls or the full call stack to aid in debugging cyclic dependencies.


Line range hint 98-175: Consider optimizing interface resolution in getResolver method.

In the getResolver method, when resolving interfaces without explicit bindings, the code performs a linear search over all registered resolvers:

if typ.Kind() == reflect.Interface {
    matches := map[reflect.Type]reflect.Type{}
    var resolverType reflect.Type
    for _, r := range c.resolvers {
        if r.getType().Kind() != reflect.Interface && r.getType().Implements(typ) {
            resolverType = r.getType()
            matches[resolverType] = resolverType
        }
    }
    // ...
}

This approach could become inefficient as the number of resolvers increases. Consider maintaining a map of interfaces to their implementing types to optimize the lookup process and improve performance.


Line range hint 274-276: Typographical error in error message.

In the error message when both ModuleKey and OwnModuleKey are declared as dependencies:

return nil, fmt.Errorf("%T and %T must not be declared as dependencies on the same provided", ModuleKey{}, OwnModuleKey{})

The word "provided" should be "provider". Correct the error message as follows:

-return nil, fmt.Errorf("%T and %T must not be declared as dependencies on the same provided", ModuleKey{}, OwnModuleKey{})
+return nil, fmt.Errorf("%T and %T must not be declared as dependencies on the same provider", ModuleKey{}, OwnModuleKey{})

Line range hint 395-398: Avoid contractions in error messages for consistency.

In the error message when a type cannot be resolved:

return reflect.Value{}, fmt.Errorf("can't resolve type %v for %s:\n%s",
    fullyQualifiedTypeName(in.Type), caller, c.formatResolveStack())

According to the Uber Go style guide, contractions should be avoided in error messages. Consider rephrasing as:

-return reflect.Value{}, fmt.Errorf("can't resolve type %v for %s:\n%s",
+return reflect.Value{}, fmt.Errorf("cannot resolve type %v for %s:\n%s",

Line range hint 470-471: Avoid contractions in error messages for clarity.

In the error message:

return []reflect.Value{}, fmt.Errorf("depinject.Out struct %s on package can't have unexported field", values[i].String())

The contraction "can't" should be avoided. Rephrase the message as:

-return []reflect.Value{}, fmt.Errorf("depinject.Out struct %s on package can't have unexported field", values[i].String())
+return []reflect.Value{}, fmt.Errorf("depinject.Out struct %s on package cannot have unexported field", values[i].String())
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  • collections/codec/string.go (2 hunks)
  • crypto/keyring/autocli.go (6 hunks)
  • crypto/keys/bcrypt/bcrypt.go (7 hunks)
  • depinject/appconfig/dynamic_resolver.go (4 hunks)
  • depinject/container.go (11 hunks)
  • depinject/errors.go (5 hunks)
  • depinject/provider_desc.go (5 hunks)
  • depinject/struct_args.go (7 hunks)
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collections/codec/string.go (1)

Pattern **/*.go: Review the Golang code for conformity with the Uber Golang style guide, highlighting any deviations.

crypto/keyring/autocli.go (1)

Pattern **/*.go: Review the Golang code for conformity with the Uber Golang style guide, highlighting any deviations.

crypto/keys/bcrypt/bcrypt.go (1)

Pattern **/*.go: Review the Golang code for conformity with the Uber Golang style guide, highlighting any deviations.

depinject/appconfig/dynamic_resolver.go (1)

Pattern **/*.go: Review the Golang code for conformity with the Uber Golang style guide, highlighting any deviations.

depinject/container.go (1)

Pattern **/*.go: Review the Golang code for conformity with the Uber Golang style guide, highlighting any deviations.

depinject/errors.go (1)

Pattern **/*.go: Review the Golang code for conformity with the Uber Golang style guide, highlighting any deviations.

depinject/provider_desc.go (1)

Pattern **/*.go: Review the Golang code for conformity with the Uber Golang style guide, highlighting any deviations.

depinject/struct_args.go (1)

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🔇 Additional comments (25)
depinject/errors.go (3)

Line range hint 16-23: LGTM: Well-implemented error creation function

The newErrMultipleImplicitInterfaceBindings function is well-implemented. It efficiently converts the map keys to a slice and correctly populates the error struct. The function name and comment follow Go conventions.


Line range hint 42-54: LGTM: Well-implemented error creation function

The newErrNoTypeForExplicitBindingFound function is well-implemented. It correctly handles the case where the module name might be nil and populates the error struct with the necessary information. The function name and comment follow Go conventions.


67-70: LGTM: Well-implemented error function

The duplicateDefinitionError function is well-implemented. It provides a clear and informative error message, including all necessary information about the duplicate type definition. The function name and comment follow Go conventions.

crypto/keyring/autocli.go (4)

33-33: LGTM: Improved comment clarity

The change from "make" to "makes" enhances the grammatical correctness of the comment, aligning with the Uber Go Style Guide's emphasis on clear and concise documentation.


43-43: LGTM: Informative comment added

The new comment for the List method provides a clear description of its functionality, adhering to the Uber Go Style Guide by starting with the name of the thing being described.


73-73: LGTM: Clear comment added

The new comment for the GetPubKey method succinctly describes its functionality, adhering to the Uber Go Style Guide by starting with the method name.


83-83: LGTM: Descriptive comment added

The new comment for the Sign method clearly explains its purpose, following the Uber Go Style Guide by beginning with the method name.

collections/codec/string.go (1)

Line range hint 53-61: DecodeNonTerminal function implementation looks good

The DecodeNonTerminal function correctly locates the StringDelimiter in the buffer and extracts the string key accordingly. The implementation is clear and adheres to expected behavior.

depinject/appconfig/dynamic_resolver.go (4)

19-21: Well-documented function FindExtensionByName.

The added comments enhance code readability and provide clear explanations of the function's behavior.


36-38: Well-documented function FindExtensionByNumber.

The comments effectively describe the purpose and implementation details of the function.


63-65: Well-documented function FindMessageByName.

The documentation provides a clear understanding of the function's operation.


80-81: Well-documented function FindMessageByURL.

The comments accurately explain how the function extracts the name from the URL and delegates the search.

depinject/provider_desc.go (2)

Line range hint 41-45: LGTM

The function extractProviderDescriptor is well-implemented and adheres to the coding standards.


Line range hint 153-168: LGTM

The function checkInputAndOutputTypes is correctly implemented and follows best practices.

depinject/struct_args.go (5)

111-111: Comment is well-formatted and follows the style guide

The documentation is clear and adheres to the Uber Go Style Guide.


139-139: Comment is well-formatted and follows the style guide

The documentation is clear and follows the recommended style.


154-154: Comment is well-formatted and follows the style guide

The function comment is properly formatted and clear.


171-171: Comment is well-formatted and follows the style guide

The documentation is clear and adheres to best practices.


194-194: Comment is well-formatted and follows the style guide

The function comment is clear and properly punctuated.

crypto/keys/bcrypt/bcrypt.go (1)

Line range hint 235-257: Ensure all components are properly formatted in Hash method.

The Hash method constructs the bcrypt hash. Verify that all components (version, cost, salt, hash) are correctly formatted and that edge cases (e.g., single-digit costs) are handled appropriately.

Run the following script to check the formatting:

✅ Verification successful

Hash Method Formatting Verified

The Hash method correctly formats the cost as a two-digit number using fmt.Sprintf("%02d", p.cost). All components appear to be properly formatted, and edge cases for single-digit costs are handled appropriately.

🏁 Scripts executed

The following scripts were executed for the analysis:

Script:

#!/bin/bash
# Description: Verify that the Hash method constructs the bcrypt hash correctly.

# Test: Ensure the cost is always two digits.
rg --type go 'fmt\.Sprintf\("%02d", p\.cost\)' -A 5

Length of output: 351

depinject/container.go (5)

Line range hint 46-53: Well-structured initialization in newContainer function.

The newContainer function correctly initializes the container struct with all necessary fields, adhering to best practices and the Uber Go style guide.


Line range hint 342-353: supply method correctly registers values.

The supply method properly registers provided values into the container and handles duplicate definitions appropriately.


Line range hint 364-377: addInvoker enforces correct invoker function usage.

The addInvoker method ensures that invoker functions do not return outputs and registers them correctly within the container.


Line range hint 509-517: Efficient formatting of resolve stack in formatResolveStack.

The formatResolveStack method effectively formats the resolve stack into a readable string, aiding in debugging dependency resolution issues.


Line range hint 521-531: fullyQualifiedTypeName provides accurate type names.

The fullyQualifiedTypeName function correctly generates fully qualified names for types, including package paths, which is useful for precise type identification.

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Hi! Some comments are great, but you are commenting self describing methods. This isn't necessary and just clutters the code.

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Hi! Some comments are great, but you are commenting self describing methods. This isn't necessary and just clutters the code.

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