Update dao page copy

Done in this pull request to avoid merge conflicts
from upcoming copy-update pull request.

_data/en.yml

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 dao_page_text:
   introTitle: "The Bisq DAO"
-  introText: "Decentralizing revenue distribution and decision-making to make Bisq self-sustaining and censorship-resistant.<span class=\"footnote\">DAO stands for Decentralized Autonomous Organisation</span><a href=\"#why\" class=\"btn btn-lg btn-outline-secondary mt-0 mt-lg-2 animate-scroll\">See more &darr;</a>"
+  introText: "Decentralizing funding and governance to make Bisq self-sustaining and censorship-resistant.<span class=\"footnote\">Bisq's DAO (decentralized autonomous organization) is built on Bitcoin.</span><a href=\"#why\" class=\"btn btn-lg btn-outline-secondary mt-0 mt-lg-2 animate-scroll\">See more &darr;</a>"
   whyTitle: Why?
-  whyText: "<p>Bisq trading is currently decentralized, but its revenue distribution and decision-making are not.</p><p>It is critical that Bisq be resistant to censorship, and the trade protocol and P2P network achieve this—for traders.</p><p>What about Bisq's developers? With a traditional legal structure, project decision-making and revenue distribution would be centralized, and this would create vulnerabilities.</p>"
+  whyText: "<p>Revenue distribution and decision-making cannot be decentralized with traditional organization structures—they require legal entities, jurisdictions, bank accounts, and more—all of which are central points of failure.</p><p>The Bisq DAO replaces such legacy infrastructure with cryptographic infrastructure to handle project decision-making and revenue distribution without such central points of failure.</p>"
   whyLinkText: Learn more about the DAO
   whatTitle: What Is The Bisq DAO?
-  whatText: "<p>The Bisq DAO enables value transfer from traders to contributors. The BSQ token makes this possible in a decentralized way.</p><p>Trading fees are distributed to contributors without the confines of a corporation or other legal entity, keeping Bisq stateless & sovereign.</p>"
+  whatText: "<p>Through the BSQ token (colored bitcoin), the Bisq DAO enables value transfer from traders to contributors without centrally-held bank accounts or wallets.</p><p>This enables trading fees to be distributed to project contributors without any banks, corporations, or other legal entities—keeping Bisq stateless & sovereign.</p>"
   whatLinkText: Learn more about the DAO
   howTitle: How Does It Work?
-  howText: "<div class=\"subtitle pt-4\"> Revenue distribution </div> <div class=\"small\"> <p> To distribute revenue from trading fees to contributors, Bisq uses BSQ - a Bitcoin-based colored coin. Contributors are issued new BSQ when stakeholders approve their compensation requests through voting, and BSQ gets “uncolored” when traders use it to pay trading fees. </p> <p> There is no central entity collecting or creating BSQ—Bisq stakeholders are collectively in charge of the issuance process. </p> <p class=\"disclaimer\"> This is not an ICO. No BSQ is sold to raise capital. </p> </div> <div class=\"subtitle pt-3\"> Decision-making </div> <div class=\"small\"> <p> With no CEO or central leadership team, Bisq stakeholders—traders and contributors—are the owners of Bisq. </p> <p> Through social consensus (via voting) they determine Bisq's project strategy. </p> </div>"
+  howText: "<div class=\"subtitle pt-4\"> Revenue distribution </div> <div class=\"small\"> <p> To distribute revenue from trading fees to contributors, Bisq uses BSQ—a Bitcoin-based colored coin. Contributors are issued new BSQ for their work, and BSQ is \"burned\" when traders use it to pay trading fees. </p> <p> There is no central entity that collects or creates BSQ—Bisq stakeholders vote on each issuance request. </p> <p class=\"disclaimer\"> There was never an ICO. No BSQ is sold to raise capital. </p> </div> <div class=\"subtitle pt-3\"> Decision-making </div> <div class=\"small\"> <p> With no CEO or central leadership team, Bisq stakeholders—traders and contributors—are the owners of Bisq. </p> <p> Through social consensus (via voting) they determine Bisq's project strategy. </p> </div>"
   howLinkText: Learn more about the DAO
   benefitsTitle: "Benefits"
   benefitsText: " <div class=\"subtitle\">Traders: Make Bisq sustainable</div> <ul class=\"small pb-5\"> <li>Help Bisq deliver consistent professional development and support by buying BSQ from contributors</li> <li>Help make Bisq the go-to censorship-resistant bitcoin-to-fiat and bitcoin-to-crypto marketplace</li> <li>Enjoy a discount if you use BSQ to pay trading fees</li> <li>You can still pay trading fees with plain BTC if you like</li> </ul> <div class=\"subtitle\">Contributors: Earn BSQ</div> <ul class=\"small pb-5\"> <li>Do valuable work, request compensation, earn BSQ</li> <li>Sell BSQ on Bisq for BTC</li> <li>Vote on compensation requests of other contributors</li> <li>Work on cutting-edge technology with a cutting-edge culture—Bisq collaboration is permissionless, non-hierarchical, and fluid</li> </ul>"