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 Below are the latest changes deployed on [Graasp Staging](https://builder.stage.graasp.org).
 
 :::warning[Important notes]
 
 - You might need to create a new account on [the staging environnement](https://auth.stage.graasp.org) since the staging environment uses a different database as production's.
 - Use a different browser or an incognito session to prevent cookie collision.
 
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-The latest updates to Graasp bring numerous improvements across its modules. Highlights include a <strong>navigation between sections in Graasp Player</strong>, a new map layout mode and dropzone displays in Graasp Builder, resolved avatar crop modal issues in Graasp Account, and significant enhancements to the Sketchfab. Read further to see the full details!
+The latest update to Graasp bring numerous improvements. Highlights include a <strong>navigation between sections in Graasp Player</strong>, a new map layout mode and a dropzone helper in Graasp Builder. We resolved an issue that prevented the update of the profile picture in Graasp Account, and significant enhancements to the Sketchfab app. Read further to see the full details!
 
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 ## Graasp Player
 
-- Introducing a navigation bar to consume content linearly
+- Introducing a navigation bar. This makes navigating lessons in order a lot easier.
 
 ![alt text](../screenshots/2024-03-12-player-navigation.png)
 
 ## Graasp Builder
 
-- Introducing the new map layout mode, providing users with an alternative view for organizing content, enhancing their overall experience.
-- Incorporating dropzone display for empty folders, offering clearer visual cues within the interface, improving user navigation.
+- Introduced the new map layout mode. You can now see your items on a map (items will need to have a geo-location set). This new view completes the existing ones: List and Grid.
+- To improve the user experience in empty folders, a helper is now displayed. This should improve the first experiences of users and allow them to add content more easily on the platform.
 
 ## Graasp Account
 
-- Resolving issues related to the avatar crop modal to enhance user customization and ensure a seamless profile visual update experience.
+- Fixed an issue preventing to update the profile picture because the modal shown to crop the image was not displaying the file.
 
 ## Graasp Apps
 
 - Sketchfab:
-  - Adding Spanish translations to broaden accessibility and inclusivity.
-  - Introducing an analytic view feature for insightful data insights.
-  - Migrating to TypeScript for improved codebase maintainability.
-  - Enabling users to save actions performed while interacting with 3D models in the player view, enhancing sharing capabilities.
+  - Added Spanish translations.
+  - Introduced an analytic view for insightful data insights.
+  - Migrated to TypeScript for improved codebase maintainability.
+  - The app now saves actions when users interact with a 3D model in the player view.
 
 ## Graasp Library
 
-- Enhancing privacy by hiding the parent items of private content.
-- Adding translations to broaden accessibility for users with different language preferences.
+- Fixed an issue where a collection could display parent element that were not published. This issue only leaked the parent names, as users were not able to access the private elements. Now a collection that is published inside a private parent will show in the same way as if it was not inside that parent element allow users to organize their collections however they like without the parent structure showing in the library.
+- Updated translations to broaden accessibility for users with different language preferences.
+- Improved loading animations and reduced layout shifts after load for a better user experience.
 
-# General
+## General
 
 - Implementing optimizations to streamline analytic traces for smoother platform performance and an enhanced user experience overall.