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@@ -12,10 +12,9 @@ sizes. Create new windows, resize, drag and drop, and see other people's cursors
 as they type, with live output. Everything is end-to-end encrypted over a
 low-latency global server mesh.
 
-This was the synthesis of multiple years of planning, development and
-experimentation. The result is a unique sofware artifact. It combines work as a
-solo engineer, crafting a complex, stateful, performant streaming system that
-expands what computers can do, and as a designer thinking about new, intentional
-ways for people to learn and communicate.
+This was the synthesis of two years of planning, development and
+experimentation. The result is a unique software artifact. It combines work as a
+solo engineer, crafting a complex, performant streaming system, and as a
+designer of deeply collaborative software.
 
 **Links: [GitHub](https://github.com/ekzhang/sshx), [Website](https://sshx.io)**