From dcbd8c6e278a351671ee31a3323a4f43f3e216e6 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Khalid Alkhalili Date: Mon, 19 Aug 2024 08:25:16 +0200 Subject: [PATCH 1/3] Fix wording and improve clarity --- src/components/HomeBenefitsSection/index.js | 46 ++++++++++----------- 1 file changed, 21 insertions(+), 25 deletions(-) diff --git a/src/components/HomeBenefitsSection/index.js b/src/components/HomeBenefitsSection/index.js index 45a3db3..57e032f 100644 --- a/src/components/HomeBenefitsSection/index.js +++ b/src/components/HomeBenefitsSection/index.js @@ -23,10 +23,10 @@ const benefitsData = { benefits_item_title: "Proof-Of-Stake And Ouroboros: The Most Environmentally Sustainable Blockchain Protocol", benefits_item_body: - "Ouroboros is the first peer-reviewed, verifiably secure blockchain protocol, and Cardano is the first blockchain \ - to implement it. Ouroboros enables the Cardano network’s decentralization, and allows it to sustainably scale to global requirements \ - without, crucially, compromising security.

The protocol is the culmination of tireless effort, building on foundational \ - research, and is propelled by a vision for more secure and transparent global payment systems, and a means to redistribute, more fairly, \ + "Ouroboros is the first peer-reviewed, verifiably-secure blockchain protocol, and Cardano is the first blockchain \ + to implement it. Ouroboros enables decentralization in the Cardano network, and allows it on sustainable scale for global requirements \ + and crucially, without compromising security.

The protocol is the culmination of tireless efforts, building on foundational \ + research, and is propelled by a vision for more secure and transparent global payment systems, and to provide the means to equitably redistribute \ power and control.", benefits_item_cta_link: "/ouroboros", benefits_item_cta_title: "Learn about Ouroboros", @@ -37,10 +37,10 @@ const benefitsData = { benefits_item_title: "The Highest Standards In Development, Rooted In Science", benefits_item_body: - "Cardano is developed using evidence-based methods: a novel combination of formal methods, which are normally \ - found in critical high-stake applications, and an agile approach, which helps the project remain adaptable and responsive to emerging \ + "Cardano is developed using evidence-based methods; a novel combination of formal methods, normally \ + found in critical high-stakes applications, and an agile approach, which helps the project remain adaptable and responsive to emerging \ requirements and new innovations. To support global applications, systems, and solutions, we believe security assurance is not a \ - choice: it’s a requirement. Our protocol implementations and platform integrations are first researched, challenged, and mathematically \ + choice: it is a requirement. Our protocol implementations and platform integrations are first researched, challenged, and mathematically \ modeled and tested before they are specified. These specifications then inform development which, in turn, is independently audited. \ The result is a codebase offering an unrivaled level of assurance.", benefits_item_cta_link: "/research", @@ -52,8 +52,8 @@ const benefitsData = { benefits_item_title: "Unparalleled Security - And The Makings Of A Trustless World", benefits_item_body: - "Cardano makes it possible for any actors that do not know each other - and have no reason to trust one another \ - - to interact and transact, securely. It’s a platform for building trust where none might naturally exist, opening up whole new markets \ + "Cardano makes it possible for any actors who do not know each other - and have no reason to trust one another \ + - to interact and transact, securely. It is a platform for building trust where none might naturally exist, opening up whole new markets \ and opportunities. Through Ouroboros, Cardano is provably secure against bad actors and Sybil attacks. Every transaction, interaction, \ and exchange is immutably and transparently recovered, and securely validated using multi-signature and a pioneering extended UTXO model.", benefits_item_cta_link: "https://roadmap.cardano.org/", @@ -67,10 +67,10 @@ const benefitsData = { "With a committed community at its core, Cardano is an open-source project developed through open \ participation. To ensure the longevity and health of the network, Cardano features an incentive mechanism that rewards \ users - either as stake pool operators or stake delegators - for their participation. The platform is built and expanded \ - through enhancement and improvement protocols. Cardano’s governance system gives everyone a democratic voice; ada holders \ + through enhancement and improvement proposals. Cardano’s governance system gives everyone a democratic voice; ADA holders \ can submit or vote on proposals to upgrade the platform or help determine the direction of development. The governance model \ - uniquely positions Cardano for future growth and development, and allows it to introduce new capability tailored to its \ - user’s needs. It ensures Cardano and its community can continuously fund and decide upon platform and ecosystem improvements.", + uniquely positions Cardano for future growth and development, and provides the means to introduce new capabilities tailored to \ + user needs. It ensures Cardano and its community can continuously fund and decide upon platform and ecosystem improvements.", benefits_item_cta_link: "/governance", benefits_item_cta_title: "Learn about governance", }, @@ -80,15 +80,15 @@ const benefitsData = { benefits_item_title: "Extremely Scalable And Environmentally Sustainable", benefits_item_body: - "Ouroboros allows Cardano to scale to global requirements with minimal energy requirements. Unlike other \ - blockchains, Cardano does not require exponentially more energy to increase performance and add blocks. The performance-sustainability \ - balance is achieved through a combination of novel approaches, including multi-ledger, side chains, and parallel transaction \ + "Ouroboros allows Cardano to scale to global requirements with minimal energy consumption. Unlike other \ + blockchains, Cardano does not require exponentially increasing energy to enhance performance and add blocks. \ + The balance between performance and sustainability is achieved through a combination of novel approaches, including multi-ledger, side chains, and parallel transaction \ processing through multi-party state channels.

The network proliferates as the number of stake pools increases, while \ parameters are set and adjusted to measure the attractiveness of specific stake pools. This is a network that rewards participation \ directly. Cardano is designed to ensure that those who act in the best interests of the network are also acting in their own best \ - interests. This ensures the development of a healthy ecosystem, and, in turn, the endurance, health, and robustness of the network, \ + interests. This ensures the development of a healthy ecosystem with a durable, healthy, and robust network, \ now and into the future. The combination of sustainability and scalability allows Cardano to achieve the throughput required to meet \ - the evolving demands of global systems: financial, logistics, identity, societal.", + the evolving demands of global systems— financial, logistical, identity-related, societal.", benefits_item_cta_link: "https://iohk.io/en/research/library/papers/hydrafast-isomorphic-state-channels/", benefits_item_cta_title: "Learn about Hydra", @@ -114,8 +114,7 @@ export default function HomeBenefitsSection() { + selectedIndex={selectedIndex}>
@@ -124,8 +123,7 @@ export default function HomeBenefitsSection() { className={clsx(styles.tab, { [styles.tabSelected]: index === selectedIndex, })} - key={index} - > + key={index}> {benefit.benefits_item_label} @@ -142,8 +140,7 @@ export default function HomeBenefitsSection() { key={index} className={`${styles.tabPanel} ${ index === selectedIndex ? "swipeIn" : "swipeOut" - }`} - > + }`}>

{benefit.benefits_item_title}

+ to={benefit.benefits_item_cta_link}> {benefit.benefits_item_cta_title}

From 2a05861b852d2e690199cc63904c0be48f005a67 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Khalid Alkhalili Date: Mon, 19 Aug 2024 09:24:02 +0200 Subject: [PATCH 2/3] Follow existing convention for angle brackets --- src/components/HomeBenefitsSection/index.js | 12 ++++++++---- 1 file changed, 8 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-) diff --git a/src/components/HomeBenefitsSection/index.js b/src/components/HomeBenefitsSection/index.js index 57e032f..9637c9f 100644 --- a/src/components/HomeBenefitsSection/index.js +++ b/src/components/HomeBenefitsSection/index.js @@ -114,7 +114,8 @@ export default function HomeBenefitsSection() { + selectedIndex={selectedIndex} + >
@@ -123,7 +124,8 @@ export default function HomeBenefitsSection() { className={clsx(styles.tab, { [styles.tabSelected]: index === selectedIndex, })} - key={index}> + key={index} + > {benefit.benefits_item_label} @@ -140,7 +142,8 @@ export default function HomeBenefitsSection() { key={index} className={`${styles.tabPanel} ${ index === selectedIndex ? "swipeIn" : "swipeOut" - }`}> + }`} + >

{benefit.benefits_item_title}

+ to={benefit.benefits_item_cta_link} + > {benefit.benefits_item_cta_title}

From 33c989a4b86cab2d5b632ec88a5e1ba80cc384d4 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Khalid Alkhalili Date: Mon, 19 Aug 2024 11:52:55 +0200 Subject: [PATCH 3/3] Fix wording and improve clarity --- src/components/HomeBenefitsSection/index.js | 8 ++++---- 1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-) diff --git a/src/components/HomeBenefitsSection/index.js b/src/components/HomeBenefitsSection/index.js index 9637c9f..51c1f13 100644 --- a/src/components/HomeBenefitsSection/index.js +++ b/src/components/HomeBenefitsSection/index.js @@ -24,9 +24,9 @@ const benefitsData = { "Proof-Of-Stake And Ouroboros: The Most Environmentally Sustainable Blockchain Protocol", benefits_item_body: "Ouroboros is the first peer-reviewed, verifiably-secure blockchain protocol, and Cardano is the first blockchain \ - to implement it. Ouroboros enables decentralization in the Cardano network, and allows it on sustainable scale for global requirements \ - and crucially, without compromising security.

The protocol is the culmination of tireless efforts, building on foundational \ - research, and is propelled by a vision for more secure and transparent global payment systems, and to provide the means to equitably redistribute \ + to implement it. Ouroboros enables decentralization in the Cardano network on a sustainable scale for global requirements \ + and most crucially, without compromising security.

The protocol is the result of tireless efforts, based on foundational \ + research, propelled by a vision for more secure and transparent global payment systems, and provides the means to equitably redistribute \ power and control.", benefits_item_cta_link: "/ouroboros", benefits_item_cta_title: "Learn about Ouroboros", @@ -67,7 +67,7 @@ const benefitsData = { "With a committed community at its core, Cardano is an open-source project developed through open \ participation. To ensure the longevity and health of the network, Cardano features an incentive mechanism that rewards \ users - either as stake pool operators or stake delegators - for their participation. The platform is built and expanded \ - through enhancement and improvement proposals. Cardano’s governance system gives everyone a democratic voice; ADA holders \ + through enhancement and improvement proposals. Cardano’s governance system gives everyone a democratic voice; ada holders \ can submit or vote on proposals to upgrade the platform or help determine the direction of development. The governance model \ uniquely positions Cardano for future growth and development, and provides the means to introduce new capabilities tailored to \ user needs. It ensures Cardano and its community can continuously fund and decide upon platform and ecosystem improvements.",